Sunday, February 26, 2023
Time to Write Week 9
Wednesday, February 22, 2023
Snagging Writing Time
I am the queen of snagging a moment to write no matter where I am. It's true what they say that writers should have a notebook handy at all times. Seriously, put a notebook in handy places.
Purse Car Bathroom Kitchen Laundry Room Nightstand Work desk It might not be overkill to have a notebook everywhere for some writers. Maybe one notebook you have small enough to keep it on your person. Everyone will have to develop their own way that works just like with anything else. When I first started writing I first wrote in a notebook and later typed it on my laptop....this was a huge waste of time and energy for me. It made the process long and tedious. For some writers though this works well. But what happens when you have no notebook and a big idea hits? I have been known to write a scene or thought on a napkin but also on a receipt standing in line to vote of all things. This is all right, don't you think? But the goal with random pieces of paper is to get them where they won't be lost. Back to your writing notebook or your writing room. I am not always organized but as my writing notebook proves...messy and crazy define the book in the end. But those random thoughts that hit you when you are not writing do not have to be jotted down on paper. For me my Galaxy Note Phone (sorry not an iPhone girl....not a Mac girl...I resist on purpose) is the best writing tool I own. I use my phone to keep those random thoughts that hit. I have used my phone to write scenes and full chapter that I later email to myself and then copy and past into my current WIP. (Work in progress) This works for me and no matter where I am the story is gaining word count. Since I am a panster who plots a bit on a story board I know what scenes are needed and I have been known to write a small scene at lunch. Later I can merge the scene into my WIP and as I do I can fluff and edit a bit and make story progress. Laptops, tablets, phones...the possibilities are endless and you have to find out what works for you. I have been known to write on my laptop or phone at soccer practice, the doctors off, waiting in various lines, and my favorite place....the beach on a lounge chair poolside. I just keep a waterproof cover for my laptop when I am not using it. It is true thought that if you plan your writing time, make sure you have a consistent writing place that is comfortable you can train your brain to be ready to write. The words will come. Lessen distraction. Music if you like. A nice smelling candle or fun light can help. A place that is yours. Setting a timer helps some authors produce word count. But again everyone has to find their own nitch. Again having an outline (for me the storyboard I mentioned) really helps you know the story. You will know then what needs to be written scene by scene. I never write in order....ever. So there are times I know I need a scene that happens to connect to scenes and so I spend time with my storyboard to map things out. Some authors love Scrivner or like programs for the same thing. I like my story board and so I write things by hand there with sticky notes of what will happen....sticky notes let me change where something is located if needed. It makes it easy to move scenes. It also makes it easy to change up what happens when my characters write their own story....and...hey I didn't know that was gonna happen...but I like it. (Coming up I hope to do a post all about how I storyboard and various ways of doing that.) Another things for me is I spend a lot of time on the road driving to and from the Nurse Job. So I try to use that time to plot in my head what scene I need to write that evening when I get home from work. Haggling through ideas of how something occurs or what is going to happen let's me better utilize my time when I do get to my laptop. Some of that planning winds up on my story board and or I write that scene and its done. The main thing is to snag those random ideas that hit you and get them into your story, so whether you use paper, your brain or a quick note on your phone, it will help you in your final goal of....FINISHING THE BOOK!
Sunday, February 19, 2023
Time to Write Week 8
So chapter 9 is the focus this week. You should be finished with chapters 7 and 8. And the focus of chapter 9 is to be around the midpoint of your story. I know it sounds like we are repeating things for this month, but this is the way you are developing routine and moving that story forward.
Some authors work by beats. Some work by chapters. Some just keep writing. I think all are acceptable but you do have to define how long the novel may be or at least give it a focused guess by this point. Sometimes I get to the end of my novel thinking I need 2 more scenes but sometimes it take more or less to finish. Nope we are not at the finish but at the mid point of your novel you gotta be thinking what is coming and how in the heat of all these stuff that is about to happen, how are you gonna make sure to get to that wonderful ending that is running through your head and should be on the outline you are keeping. So for 2 months this is what we have. One more week to catch up and be done through chapter 9. Just a reminder while this blog is pacing what we need to do weekly. Some are following closely. Some are ahead and some behind. The pace if yours to set. No pressure other then an hour a day whatever that does for you and your story. This idea was give a push to those who cannot seem to finish a story timely or those who need a pass or a plan. And for the most part if you reached this week you may be halfway done with a rough draft for your novel. Week 8" 1). Focus on Chapters 7 through 9. You have spent three weeks on these 3 chapters and hope ther focus has helped you reach a mid point in your story without it having a saggy or slow middle. 2) view your outline...yes again. You should have fou d time to read quickly from the beginning now so you should add hints or things to fix or look at later in various chapters. Again no edits now. 3) take a look at what needs to happen in the next 3 chapters and jot down your ideas. Those ideas may have pieces in chapters 7 8 9...so tweak where needed. Share your idea related to your being a plotter or panster. What works for you? What doesn't? Any new craft books that are helping you? What about podcasts or other links you might share.Wednesday, February 15, 2023
Writing Scenes...Writing Faster....
So what is the difference between a chapter verses a scene? Some authors make a scene a chapter and some chapters can have multiple scenes.
Everyone has their own style of writing, plotting out every detail or just grabbing a laptop and tossing an idea on the page. There is no right way but learning to write scenes can help you pull your story together faster and help to save the slow middle everyone has to refine.
Scenes are Mini-happenings that link the story. Scenes have a beginning and middle and end.
Chapters are clear large happenings which move the story forward and allowed for giving the reader order within the story.
One scene might actually complete a chapter while another chapter might have several scenes.
I always say and I more a panster than a plotter but that isn't always the truth. I plot out a bit of my story in my head but I have never written a story in order. I know things that will happen and so often enough I write various scenes that I see occurring and later I add them to my WIP. (Work in Progress)
Once added to my WIP I might have to do several things. Once might be that I need to add another scene to connect the current scene into the story to make sure it is connected and what is happening flows. Other times I add the scene and then fluff more of what is happening and a short scene might grow into a full chapter by the time I am done. And lastly I may add rhe scene and realize while I love it...the story doesn't need it. (But I do save these scene in another file so I can keep them if they are not needed.)
It's important when merging scenes that they fit where they have the most impact. Scenes have to fall into the pacing of the story and character arc to make an impact which moves your story forward.
A lot of times my stories are written in scenes with only scene breaks in between and no chapter headings. Once I have a rough draft I go back and decide how many scenes make each chapter as I work through the story Once more.
Writing in scenes can make a better flushed out story. Meaning scenes can be shorter and tighter...less word count and getting to the point. Thus a cleaner story when you finally have a first draft. This can make editing a bit easier. As you pull together scenes then you can focus on good chapter beginning and how a chapter ends...to make that reader keep reading and turn that page.
When writing a scene it needs to bring a change or offer a push ahead on the story...not just be stuck there for filler. Something has ro change for the scene to be vital to the story.
A scene should not be long descriptions of scenery and setting. And it shouldn't just be an idle scene of characters sitting around with no purpose. It shouldn't be random happenings that do not add to the story. And as we always know not to dump backstop or big info dumps...scenes should not do this either.
Scenes need to add an active turning point. Something needs to happen to add conflict or cause a change for a character or for the overall story. A scene should provide a turning point at times...the character learns something new or realizes something important. Again something should change that impacts the story and reader.
So whether you are a plotter or panster or write your story in order or not, you may benefit from writing strong scenes verses long chapters. Give it a try...
Remember to identify your scenes purpose. When and where does the scene take place and who is in the scene. Get quickly to the why this scene is needed. What is discovered? What changes? And does it push your story forward?So what is the difference between a chapter verses a scene? Some authors make a scene a chapter and some chapters can have multiple scenes.
Everyone has their own style of writing, plotting out every detail or just grabbing a laptop and tossing an idea on the page. There is no right way but learning to write scenes can help you pull your story together faster and help to save the slow middle everyone has to refine.
Scenes are Mini-happenings that link the story. Scenes have a beginning and middle and end.
Chapters are clear large happenings which move the story forward and allowed for giving the reader order within the story.
One scene might actually complete a chapter while another chapter might have several scenes.
I always say and I more a panster than a plotter but that isn't always the truth. I plot out a bit of my story in my head but I have never written a story in order. I know things that will happen and so often enough I write various scenes that I see occurring and later I add them to my WIP. (Work in Progress)
Once added to my WIP I might have to do several things. Once might be that I need to add another scene to connect the current scene into the story to make sure it is connected and what is happening flows. Other times I add the scene and then fluff more of what is happening and a short scene might grow into a full chapter by the time I am done. And lastly I may add rhe scene and realize while I love it...the story doesn't need it. (But I do save these scene in another file so I can keep them if they are not needed.)
It's important when merging scenes that they fit where they have the most impact. Scenes have to fall into the pacing of the story and character arc to make an impact which moves your story forward.
A lot of times my stories are written in scenes with only scene breaks in between and no chapter headings. Once I have a rough draft I go back and decide how many scenes make each chapter as I work through the story Once more.
Writing in scenes can make a better flushed out story. Meaning scenes can be shorter and tighter...less word count and getting to the point. Thus a cleaner story when you finally have a first draft. This can make editing a bit easier. As you pull together scenes then you can focus on good chapter beginning and how a chapter ends...to make that reader keep reading and turn that page.
When writing a scene it needs to bring a change or offer a push ahead on the story...not just be stuck there for filler. Something has ro change for the scene to be vital to the story.
A scene should not be long descriptions of scenery and setting. And it shouldn't just be an idle scene of characters sitting around with no purpose. It shouldn't be random happenings that do not add to the story. And as we always know not to dump backstop or big info dumps...scenes should not do this either.
Scenes need to add an active turning point. Something needs to happen to add conflict or cause a change for a character or for the overall story. A scene should provide a turning point at times...the character learns something new or realizes something important. Again something should change that impacts the story and reader.
So whether you are a plotter or panster or write your story in order or not, you may benefit from writing strong scenes verses long chapters. Give it a try...
Remember to identify your scenes purpose. When and where does the scene take place and who is in the scene. Get quickly to the why this scene is needed. What is discovered? What changes? And does it push your story forward?
Sunday, February 12, 2023
A visit from Shelley White Author!
Triumph Over Adversity (alt. title: just keep swimming)
By Shelley White
Struggle: verb def.2: to proceed with great difficulty
or with great effort
noun def 2: a violent effort or exertion: an act of
strongly motivated striving
It’s real y’all! As someone who hasn’t touched their
WIP since November, I’m hardly qualified to offer advice on staying on track. I
have numerous valid excuses and several less valid ones, but for me, it boils
down to discipline. I’ve spent a lot of time beating myself up for not being
able to pull it together and get BUSY. This has not been a productive use of my
time.
Instead, I’m working on being incredibly proud of
myself when I complete my to do list-even if it takes two days. I’m forcing
myself to take satisfaction in completing smaller projects and I’m trying not
to see my WIP as a looming boogeymonster. Keeping the negatives at bay is
challenging.
I originally planned to write about critique groups
and how they help keep me on task. I’m going to switch gears here then hopefully
tie everything together nice and neat.
I’m part of a critique group with five other authors.
We meet every other week and look at about fifteen to twenty pages from three
members each time. So I need to have stuff to give them once a month. Sometimes,
that is enough to keep me writing.
We write in a variety of fiction genres and all bring
our own strengths to the table. I fondly call one of our members the
Comma-dant. He’s a master of punctuation. We’re flexible and can opt out of our
turn if we don’t have anything ready. Our meetings are relaxing and, in
addition to critiquing, we spend time talking craft, marketing, and sharing
ideas. We are all riding the same struggle bus in our own ways.
In our November meeting, someone submitted her poetry
chapbook. She was already in the publication process but wanted our
impressions. None of us write much poetry, and her stuff was pretty heavy. One
poem in particular mentioned ashes. After some discussion and the meaning
revealed, another member said she thought it was about vampires. It wasn’t, of
course. No one expects vampires.
I told her I would write a vampire poem and dedicate
it to her. We all laughed.
Then I woke up at 5:30 in the morning a few days later
and wrote my first vampire poem.
It wasn’t a serious poem. I am not a serious poet. But
they sure are entertaining to me and touch a warped part of my psyche that
apparently needed some exercise to get the writing juices flowing again.
Six vampire poems later, my friend is disappointed
that my vampires are snarky and not sexy. I’m working on it, but the muse wants
what it wants.
I needed the mental break from the projects awaiting
my attention, this one included. And the good news is, my WIP is poking its
head out of the closet and speaking to me again.
So, my advice for you for 2023 is this; find your
tribe. They will understand what you’re going through and can offer advice,
support, commiseration, or a much needed laugh. The second is this, write
anything. Write a poem, a scene, or something outside your genre. When it hits
you, write it down, no matter what it is. Then, by golly, be proud of it. We’re
not going to get out of our writing slumps by taking giant leaps. With
motivated striving, just keep swimming.
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Time to Write Week 7
This week is a repeat of week 6 as you work on Chapters 7 8 9. Some may want to continue to work on one chapter a week and other may like the freedom to work it through chapter 9.
I would say if you are rolling along and even wish to go further keep going. Don't wait on thig blog to accomplish each week if you are gaining speed. But to keep us making positive progress. Use your outline to check your progress. Jot down notes and ideas of what needs to be fixed added or deleted. And if you have not done the read through of the entire novel do so but only a quick read to remind you of things that need to be tweaked. Why edits later? So the momentum of a chapter a week doesn't slow you down. Move that story. You should not give yourself the chance at all to sit and rewrite chapter 1 again and again and again. YOU CANNOT EDIT AN UNFINISHED STORY. Too many things may change to worry about rewrites right now. This whole blog is about the idea of completing a rough draft...that can then be edited! Sure that first draft when you are done is going to be crap! And thats OK. It will be done crap! And now when we map out what to do for edits you will be ready!!!! So week 7: 1) work on Chapters 7 through 9 with a focus on 8. Those who gain momentum move on. Those who are lagging think about why? Is something saggy in the middle? Do you have enough drama and conflict? Is suspense being pulled together? If you are board with your own story chances are readers will be too. But don't fret. KEEP WRITING! 2) do your full quick read if you didn't do it last week. Is your outline coming to life? Are things that need to happen coming together. Make notes on your outline of what is needed. I like to put little boxes by my outline of things to make sure I do later. And you know me being the nerd I like to check that box off when I get to the editing part of my story. 3) thinking only about Chapters 7 8 9....are they meeting the mark of pulling the story together? If you are planning a twenty chapter novel you should be close or in the mid part of thr story. If not think about how you can move the story there quickly there. Now if you story is longer and you may have 40 chapters then you need to focus on what happens after chapter 9...what is coming and is your story taking the reader there? What has been the easy things about following this plan? What has not worked for you? While every writer does things differently my hope is this blog will just help everyone participating to make progress even if not all at the same time.
Facebook handout: Author Kim Turner for more hints and support.
Wednesday, February 8, 2023
One Hour Early or One Hour....
Sunday, February 5, 2023
Time to Write Week 6
If you are reading this post then you are at the writing of chapters 7 through 9 I hope. And for the remainder of Feb. The next 2 to 3 weeks this is your assignment. We'll keep working on these three chapters so you have time if you are not there yet and so if you are there you can make sure the story has what it needs.
Decide where you are in your story or along your outline and decide what do you need to make sure chapters 1 through 9 are happening, at least in rough draft format. Some novels have 20 chapters, Some have more and some have less. There is no amount that is required but if you are thinking you may be near the halfway point then think about what is needed to head that direction. The other side of that is to take a look at what you have and is the story staying true to the plan or have you written it right off the planning pages. Panstering is great and I love to let the characters lead me right through a story. But are things coming together or has that saggy middle caught you? If so you may need to take time to tweak a few story items. That is not to say you are going back to chapter 1 and rework the entire things. THAT IS NOT ALLOWED. Just make notes of what is needed where for your story to continue on the path you are making.Wednesday, February 1, 2023
Prologue/Epilogue or not
There are some editors and some houses that will tell you not to add a Prologue or an Epilogue to your story. There are also some readers who will tell you they usually skip reading the Prologue. Given this what is the best way to add a Prologue and an Epilogue so you can assure your editor, publisher and even your readers will love what you have added to your story.
We will start with hints for writing a Prologue first. Keep the Prologue short. If it goes on and on, readers will tire quickly of it. A short and well written Prologue will engage your readers right away if done well. One to three page prologues should be enough to get to the point. A good prologue should include something that isn't shared elsewhere. Make the point of the Prologue be very clear. Again it should be engaging enough to capture your readers attention. But ask yourself why the Prologue is needed. Does it push the story forward or give hints about what the story holds in adding to the story. Make sure the Prologue doesn't give conflicting or confusing information. If a reader cannot engage in what is being presented they may read no further. Would your story be complete without the prologue you have written? If so you don't need the prologue or you need a different angle on it to make the story make sense. A Prologue should not simply be the start of the story where it seems like chapter one. Most often a Prologue should occur prior to where the story starts or for a twist it might explain something that happens in the story after the fact. As an example, it could occurring 4 months prior to chapter one. Or two years prior to chapter one. But it might also add a bit of intrigue for the reader to have the Prologue explain something and chapter one begins several months prior to the prologue, giving the reader a hint at what might have played out. Or a hint of what is coming when chapter one begins prior to the event described in the prologue. A prologue should contain enough action to make the reader engage in what is being planned within the story. But too much action isn't always the answer. If a lot of unexplained action happens without hints of what is to come, the reader may be confused or bored by what is taking place. Make sure the characters within the Prologue are up to something interesting enough to keep the reader engaged. It need to make sense to moving the story forward but a Prologue should not be a place to dump I formation or backstory. Some authors/editors will tell you not to label your prologue as such but to go ahead and make it chapter one. I personally do not agree with this as I mostly write historical western romance where having a Prologue and an epilogue is better accepted. I think it is best to identify for the reader what they are reading. Avoid the dreaded dream Prologue. I have never much liked where a fantastic scene or chapter has the character wake up from a dream at the end, leaving me to wonder if what happened is even a real part of the story. That can be for some readers a big point of dissatisfaction. It might be wise to have a Prologue that occurred in a different location than where the story takes place. This isn't a hard requirement by any means but can add to the engagement of the reader. A prologue should raise but maybe not answer a question. You need to keep the reader wanting more and questions of what happens next can keep the reader turning the page. Readers will want to know they will find put what happens and the promise of that keeps them in the story. A good prologue might introduce the perils or the main problem a character will go through but with only a hint of what will happen. A prologue might be in a different POV than the main character of a story to add a bit of depth. Maybe the POV in the prologue belongs to the villain for instance. And now let's discuss Epilogues. If you write a strong ending to a story some authors and editors may say an Epilogue isn't needed. An Eplilogue takes place outside the main story and most of the time is after time has elapsed at the end of a story such as a few months later to even several year later. A good Epilogue should add to bring more closure to a story when needed, often time more often used in historical novels. It is not another enhanced ending but should satisfy readers further. An Epilogue may serve to further tidy up a story. To enhance by adding things not resolved for the reader in the main story. Often an epilogue may be added to give a hint at how things went after the end of the story. The Epilogue needs to be needed to finalize details. Your story should stand alone without it and it's only purpose is too enhance details of the future. It is OK to leave some things open to the readers imagination and not have an Epilogue. it is important to end your story well instead of worrying about setting up a sequel to the story. Yes you may want to hint at a future story but make your ending clear before you worry about showing your readers the details or hints of what is to come. So an epilogue is best when For closure For happily ever after For introducing a sequel Just make sure that when writing a prologue and or epilogue that they are truly needed and written tight and to the point.